Dovina4 Mar 2007

Don’t believe Rocky; this is not a good poem; he only agrees with your position. Hell, if I write about the virtue of zeroing, he’ll leap all over it. No, but if you do, he will. All he has for me is ‘honey bun” and “squeal.”

“Of” on line 2 surely should be “of.”

“Of buildings had laid in ruins” should surely lose the “had.”

To name just a few.