poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Abused Light by Greeny.

Dovina13 Mar 2007

Good descriptions of fireworks exploding in the night, if that's what it is. I don't see why light is abused, unless the fireworks are irritating someone; it's not clear. I think "expose" needs an apostrophe on the last e. The semicolon should be a colon or dash, I think.