richa16 Mar 2007

I don't thin the line breaks work here. With couplets there is little point in using enjambment. I would just write the first three couplets as follows:

Love is burning
you can see it in her eyes.

(or Love is burning you
can see it in her eyes).

Love is burning
you can hear it in his sighs.

(or Love is burning you
can hear it in his sighs).

He feels so old beside Her
and wonders how can this be?