poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on You can't send love to a voicemail. by drnick.

Skamper30 Mar 2007

Loving the title, so direct and harsh!
Last line throws me a little though, not sure why, but if I replace 'just wait' with 'hang on' I get it to flow better. Plus it ties in with being on the phone if you know what I mean?