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ReplyTo a comment on I Dig a Ponytail by Doris & Oats by w~* ATHENA *~w.

horus815 Sep 2002

maybe lose the, "or did we"? or bend the title to fit a little less crypticly? it's almost emotionaly unavailable...sorta self serving and perhaps a bit unique, but only to you...because it serves no purpose to the reader other than confusion...even if it makes all the sense in the world to you. to another its a bit neither here nor there.