poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on The Happy Side of Misery by Dovina.

Dovina24 May 2007

I see your point. Verses 2 band 3 are past tense, all rest are present. My "good reason" for changing tense was to stress a change from just observing to drawing inferences, however strange, given the cyclist's weariness. I'm going to revise it, since everyone is having trouble following this biker's reasoning.