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ReplyTo a comment on The Happy Side of Misery by Dovina.

Dovina24 May 2007

Line 3 should prolly be "a dairy barn behind."
"instead of lying in the shade," could lose the article, but darn, I need it for rhythm.
ok, I'll dump "the" from "wrestling with the norms,"
Like it better now?