poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on No-Strings by sca.

Ranger6 Jun 2007

This is your best yet from what I've seen. You've got a good sense of meter, although the first line is bulky. I'd split that line slightly:

Damn it,
why do...

etc.

"Just-the-one is not your type" is the best line. -9-