lmp12 Jun 2007

no ya didn't. i think ya gotta "accept" your revision for it to go into effect.

not sure if that revision would really work anyway; then you'd be repeating "August" two lines away from the first instance.

I actually like the S2 L2 line, so instead maybe focus on S1 L4.
maybe it could be something like: "maybe late summer, but not early spring."

be looking for some change, at any rate...