poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on The Lover and The Rapist by Skamper.

SupremeDreamer18 Jun 2007

"make all your birthday wishes – true"

why didn't you inlude COME? Speak it out loud, tell me what beat is missing? Check This:

make all your birthday wishes
cum true
while I push my fingers deeper
into you
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Do you get what I'm saying? That aside, here's a nine.