poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Between two Truths by Dovina.

lmp20 Jun 2007

S2 L4/L5... the repeat of "comfort" is not as strong as it could be. maybe L4 starts "offers sanctuary ...". I would also end with a colon on L4 to deliver L5.

an interesting look at a subculture of the US that i struggle to comprehend. i really believe i would have a hard time living there...

so what's around the bend and over the next hill?