poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Consider the Grass by Dovina.

Ranger3 Jul 2007

It works better now. 'Sways to wind and rain' is exactly what I was talking about. Perhaps a couple more sibilants in some places to keep a constant hissing of grass? Maybe that would be a little over the top, but it might be worthwhile playing around with the sound.