lmp20 Sep 2007

i dont really get any cynicism here. perhaps i am daft.

i was rather repulsed by the cowering servility of the narrator, but then the last verse i can almost see a sneer creep into the subject's face. i do hope that the keepr of the subject's soul is not the "Lord" or "Master", but rather the subject themsleves.

maybe the words are spoken true, as in "i will shield nothing from you since all i do is what you ask." in that case, i am further repulsed.

not your best, but we all write what we need to write, nonetheless.