Skamper26 Nov 2007

I do love a good vent/rant...whether at a person or an ideal stage we strive to achieve...

and I do like this

there are a few places I would tighten up a little, give more oomph to the structure.

for instance...

I used to think life would make sense -
one day
all my efforts would pay off
and all my terror - end
and I'd coast for a little while
I thought, if I
kept fighting
kept holding on
I would make it
that I
would leave it all behind