Don-Quixote29 Jul 2008

"You were once been mine."
No... no.

'You had once been mine."

Now if we could just make something worth reading out of this idea of ashes? Something that doesn't make me think an eleven year old girl wrote it.

Ashes, ashes, and we all fall
DOWN!

Two. And that's only because there's something that can be done with the concept, but nothing can fix the failure of execution.