Blindpoetry7 Aug 2008

Why do you add two poems? Is it because you couldn't wait to hear how awful your stuff is?

"oh but, you know, they're both talking about the same thing. it's really-"
FUCK. OKAY.
Well just fix the last two rhymes in the first poem. Too much... force. Didn't flow well at all compared to the rest.

The second poem, I find not horrible.

How do you expect to rate this? I'm actually gonna rate this and you put me a predicament. thanks.