SupremeDreamer5 Sep 2008

I think you should cut out "for that place" and simply end S4 with "better to wait." Also, its "damn", not "dam".-- Instead of "do not look back", use the contraction -don't-. Also I think the line "so far have you come" would be better edited to "you've come so far"-- It's a tad cliche but it sounds better and sometimes these things can not be avoided.

Some capitalization and punctuation wouldn't hurt either, but it's not absolutely necessary.