SupremeDreamer5 Sep 2008

This should be termed either a "micro poem" or a "teaser poem". It seems as if you conjured up an awesome outline of a mighty centurions' head and never got around to giving him a body in which to conduct battle. I demand that this warrior be given flesh, blood, and a wicked keen blade!!

I want to say eight, or even nine at this point;- but since you left your behemoth wanting, I am forced to give this a five.