poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Windmill by the Sea by Jeremi B. Handrinos.

jh9928 Feb 2010

Seems incomplete. Perhaps
" You left ( me ) wanting
( Leaving me to come ) back for more ". Do not be afraid to involve more imagery, metaphors on the wind, windmills, even references to being Don Quixote or Sancho Panza and relationships being the mythical dragon. Typo on " too " should be " to " instead.