anonymous13 May 2002

okay I had some advice but I'll just rewrite it how I'd do it:
Lingering and longing have now swallowed me whole./
The teeth of emptiness no longer press against my soul.
Our endless lazy days of frolick are gone/
With the pleasant haze of youth/
That was taken from my song.

By wash, did you mean watercolour or ink? If so it wasn't clear.