poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on When Your Best Friend Says You Drink Too Much by jessicazee.

god'swife18 Oct 2002

Your previous 2 were so good, my expectations are not met with this one, but I can see it in there, like a red speck in an egg. The last stanza is my favorite. Trying starting with that one and see were it leads, Sugar Dumpling.