poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Do Swans Get Jealous? (#2) by Christof.

Bachus21 Oct 2002

i would like it if you changed the second use of the word "white" to cream...yeah sorbet cream..like jizz...was just listening to your dance of the furies?!, great medoly i'd like to say you were a helluve a composer...and not a bad writer neither...heres a ten for you..why? cuz i,ve given you so many fucking zeros up until this point that it makes my head spin, and i can't remember for the life of me why? oh well..i really dug this, and it made me feel...well..hard. thanks. 10..