Caducus19 Dec 2002

I dont always vote on the whole poem and this one by you is a classic example why.

Stanza 1 nothing wrong with it.
its a bit generalistic and wishy washy from there.

However I wrote a whole poem last week around 2 lines i wrote from a poem 10 years ago, it was well received on here so just remember all the poetry you write is good because you write it, the key is finding the path to peoples empathy and originating a unique style that people buy. Anyway happy holiday hobojo, 0 votes fly around on this site like tears in a pram its not bad ---5