<~>23 Dec 2002

i think you need to imply that. she awoke the soul in you; she breathed fire into your being. the repeat has a lovely cadence to it, but you have left out the crux of it. be empty before and empty after--in words.

see, i thought that was what you meant, but i could have thought anything. i wanted more clues.

also, this line is confusing to me:
And every good trait of me,
did not wait for me, to represent it.