poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on strange beds (1989) by Bill Z Bub.

Bill Z Bub1 Jan 2003

Yeah, that first line is one thats been bugging me, but I'm not sure what to change it to yet. At the time I meant it to be something mystical.
I wrote the first half of this many years ago. Thankyou, yes, I want to turn you on. I want to turn on the world!
Any suggestions?