horus815 Jan 2003
"what switch
in our alien hearts
makes us part?"
needs one more word
like 'today'
or jete'
crochet
j-bay
(just kidding on the last one)
or some down beat
otherwise a serious favorite of mine..i realize i've been
giving you votes in this run that will keep you from re-editing,
that's cool, i understand..these poems are really moving and
sculpted, and i don't blame you.
enjoy.