Ranger27 Feb 2003
The big problem here is the subject matter. As soon as anyone on this site sees a poem about 9/11 they'll instantly laugh, mainly because most efforts to write about it have been shite.
Being pedantic, I personally hate seeing "must of" or "would of" or anywhere in which 'of' is substituted for 'have'. But that's just me.
I wrote a poem about 9/11 but it takes a slightly different stance. Maybe I'll submit it.