poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on His Dying Words (2nd draft) by Ranger.

Fear of Garbage1 Mar 2003

Ranger i've read some of your other works and although i respect your language and obvious intelligence sometimes when i'm reading your poetry i don't enjoy the piece at all because i'm so busy critiquing it as i go.

i have a just one piece of advice for you. stop trying to rhyme. anything. at all.