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The death of Bachus (Free verse) by <{Baba^Yaga}>

To Zion young man. Hold onto the strong urge That dwells within your shattered gait call's you home to finally purge You walked with men that smoked your face and battled tearing scabbing lace for nothing but your mother's grace, but she hangs dry flowered, an empty tank by those same men part of you, too. Now just know, I let you go Half-New.

<~> 18-Mar-03/7:34 AM
dammit! why am i always the last to know!!!

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