poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on His Dying Words (2nd draft) by Ranger.

INTRANSIT21 Mar 2003

Swap lines 5 and 6 and merge them. You have great potential, especially starting at such a young age. If this fulfills you, and puts a smile on your face, then continue to work at it. (9) I think you're close here.
Very close.