OneFingerAnswer29 Mar 2003

Line 4: absolutely
Line 7: Seems kind of muddled. Maybe "As I stand in the raging storm on what was once a bright and sunny day"
Line 8: If it's stormy it's not really empty. Maybe "stormy and gray" (Or synonymous words to avoid repetition)

I don't understand some of the words you choose to capitalize. For a title, "Turbulence" ?