thepinkbunnyofdoom18 Apr 2003
I never said that it wasn't questionable. I was merely showing the guidelines by which I was going. The experiance I'm describing is literally a decent into madness(of which D.A. is very right this poem is by and about a lunatic), this literally is one of my nightmares, put into words, at the best of my abilities at the present, of which I apologize if it doesn't fit into a ryhming lines or neat little stanzas, or most of the other niffy little rules that most people consider to be poetic. SO FEEL FREE TO QUESTION ITS STATUS AS A POEM AND GOOD EVENING TO YOU! o