thepinkbunnyofdoom29 Apr 2003

Thanx I was just being commenting about how we(men) end up trying to prove our feelings but in the end its never enough. I'm sure I'll rewrite it soon but right now I like the playful mockery this makes of my inner emo kid. If possible could you try and point out the awkward points so that I can give some thought to how to rewrite them?