poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Totem Pole by horus8.

thepinkbunnyofdoom8 May 2003

Seems to me that there are a few awkward places if I read it out loud. Other than the "We've got a hundred reasons to live;" it seems to extend just about a breath too far compared to the rest of the lyric. Very nice tho -9-