poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Four Chapters from the Detective Plum files by horus8.

INTRANSIT2 Jun 2003

Your armpit puncture wound has problems. namely gravity. "practically borderline nauseating" redundant?
sounds like a semi-serious writ. do it again and do it write. needs a tad more humor if thats what you're trying to do.my <.02. that is all.