scitz17 Jun 2003
Thought this was brilliant, I love line 2 its original. Your an interesting character I either love your stuff or hate it and you've said a couple of negative things about me in the past but fuck it we don't have to like each other.
I feel I am improving as a writer, more experimental and I believe you must selectively read the good and ignore the bad and let it inspire you.
What about you ?
By the way my brother's gone AWOL last I heard he was state side.
Great poem - seriously.
a rare 10