SupremeDreamer1 Jul 2003
Ok, your long introduction was... long.. i skipped it after reading maybe 25% of it. It was also vague and looked like senseless babble.
But your ending was interesting and well written, but lacks a creative presentation and form. It does have a very nice mind tickling point that makes me wonder what exactly are you saying. I'll save my vote in hopes of seeing you rewrite this.