<{Baba^Yaga}>8 Jul 2003

This exposes too much, and you shouldn't because, well, good poetry use that concealment to its advantage, you give too much away here unfortunately. All of these aren't completely hopeless though, they can be reworked. You have to go for the knock out resolve. Read 12673 Jalepeno ave, by Jeremi B. Handrinos, to see what I mean.