poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on unsent by Bill Z Bub.

EAger to Offend13 Jul 2003

I really dig that a love poem can be clever, and dark, and NOT too sappy. Take my breath and take my tongue are great requests for a kiss.
I'm sorry, you are mistaken. This is not your best work. But it might be, tomorrow. 9