poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on The Umpteenth Home by EAger to Offend.

thepinkbunnyofdoom14 Jul 2003

Here is my rewrite

When I was born,
a child only dreamed of,
mearly a lust that couldn't be filled,
that dream was forgotten when I was brought into this world
I was loved before and even more after I was born, Again