LuckyJoe23 Jul 2003

You set my heart on an ending that would compliment the beginning and that I didn't get. Being mislead or supprised by verse doesn't do anything for me. Had I not set my mind to how I wanted it ended I'm sure it would have been great. Not knocking your work by any means it was still good.
Keep on writing, as a fellow poet I can speak for us all saying we like seeing others ideals to widen our own.