poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Her Sleeping Form by JoyLuck.

thepinkbunnyofdoom23 Jul 2003

Okay here is my piss poor atempt.

The Way Murder is Done(Couplets) by TPBOD

Do you mind if I pop a sqaut?
I thought not.
In just a few hours your bowels will cave in.
I'll be long gone before then.

I did it you asshole.
Mother fucker whose got fucking control?
Look at you, your falling apart.
Your as bad as that cunt, Museheart.

You can't say that you didn't get what you deserve.
Now I hope you don't mind but I need something to calm my nerves.
You want one?, Too bad my skittles.
Here soon I'll chop the rest of you into little bittles.

Maybe cut off a slice of your calf to add to a BLT.
Oh god wouldn't that be heavenly.
I hated you, you fucking Jew.
They'll never Identify you.