poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Departing Suburbia by Caducus.

<~>25 Jul 2003

cad-- a few nitpicks:

starved cravings--redundant

‘lets do lunch' bunch flow chart obssesives--corrected punctuation


nice lines here:
Sell a common man a common dream,
Weave the fabric of society in to his seam,