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ReplyTo a comment on You wash up, I forget. by Bachus.

http://mulberryfairy28 Jul 2003

I liked "I decline out of guilt and fear and love and space." The "My mind concludes/ To much weight./For such a short time." is confusing unless "to" is supposed to be "too" and there is not supposed to be a period after weight. But you are right, bathtubs aren't made for two.