poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on A parking lot, a smoke, and the pleasure of being alone by thepinkbunnyofdoom.

INTRANSIT5 Aug 2003

Pinkmeister, This does have potential. It NEEDS to drop the (sentence) structure. and it reepats itself for an ending. It's good to play poet. It's better to back it up with some work.