poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on 1967 Ford Carmine Jalopy by SupremeDreamer.

abecedarian10 Aug 2003

you know supreme (can I call you that?)
of course I can , because as I've said... I'm drunk

Horus said something to me recently .. um er.. to Retaliate recently that his Mentor (the capital was conspicuos) apparently told him:

(and this has caused me to think about the subject dammit)

"You've strung together some nice words" was the phrase.

Is it possible that increasing one's vocabulary actually decreases one's effectiveness as a poet?

Or maybe that's just the homebrew speakin'

(As a fellow LA dweller I appreciate the humour, but I'm going to find you and burn your car to a briquette so that you can claim insurance and the environment can sleep better)