poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Playa been caught in their games. (revised/new) by LuckyJoe.

http://mulberryfairy11 Aug 2003

Yes, much improved, a few typos in there, but definitely better. See BabaYaga's comment below though about the love toy, that doesn't work for me. I have a decent (I think) affair poem too, check it out, it is called "8:45am dentist appointment".