horus811 Aug 2003

Please, where you were going with it? There is no perplexing riddle to the theme or this poems point. It's your classic under loved housewife/or unmarried longterm girlfriend/lied to mistress blues coupled by the inevitable 'and all this love you gave away for what in return revelation?'. There's nothing to it. Nothing new. You should get risky and write it from the other person's perspective. And I wasn't crying I was doing the Jerk. So what does that leave you with? lol.