Mr Pig20 Aug 2003

Excellent.

Up to we are equal in blackness is a poem in itself. It saddens me that your the one person who would never have one positive thing to say about any of my poems, not one.

I really liked this poem and you can say what you will of mine.

I would however repsectfully ask you to read my poem 'The Blooding' or 'The Grave' and tell me what you liked and what you didn't like.

Thank You

Antony

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