poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Undefined Infinity by InvertedEar.

SupremeDreamer3 Sep 2003

"I knew we both wished this photograph lasts to eternity"

huh? maybe this would work better:

I knew we wished this photograph to last an eternity.

hrmm? dont you think this makes more sense?

overall, i like this, but its a rough draft in my opinion, it needs to be ironed out.

Blessed with 8.